IELTS TASK-1(Analytical Parahraph) INTRO & OVERALL fully explained with examples
hello students welcome back to my channel English Wave my name is Gurbhej Sran and i'm going to start a special series on writing module of the IELTS and in this video we are going to start task 1 or in the cbse curriculum this is called an analytical paragraph so without any further ado let's start with the video so first of all let's start with what is an analytical paragraph analytical paragraph it's very clear from name that you have to analyze the things and describe as per your own language now what are the things which will be given to you and from where you have to analyze the things you will be given one type of a graph and you have to analyze that and you have to assess that graph and write on the trends of the graph so these are the graphs that you you can be given line graph pie chart bar graph table chart or map chart and a process chart and out of them these are the four graphs which are very common in case of cbsc curriculum and in the ielts you can be given any type of graph out of them so let's see how many words you have to write down while describing in case of cbse curriculum you have to write down at least 120 words and in case of ielts you have to write down at least 150 words but i would recommend you to go beyond at least 170 to 180 words for the better scores so this was all about the analytical paragraph and today we will start with the line graph that is our first type of the graph and before this let's see the general structure of the analytical paragraphs so generally we use four body paragraph system first body paragraph that is called introduction part what you are supposed to write on in the introduction part you have to introduce what type of graph is given what are what is the information and uh what are the units or several trends that that particular graph will go through right let's see the next body paragraph that is overall somewhere in the structures it is given that students are supposed to write on the conclusion part but i would not say a conclusion because this is not an issue that we have to discuss and conclude at the end this is just a data of the past which is compiled in the form of graph and you have we have to assess that data and you have to write down the data and it's very clear from the from statement we are supposed to describe the data in past definite tense i'm talking about description only introduction and overall parts can be written in present definite also because these are the these are the things that we are making right away when we are assessing the graph right so overall so instead of conclusion part i would write on overall what are the things that you are you are supposed to put in overall first thing to remember that you are not supposed to put any data in the overall overall means we have to see the general overview of the graph what what are the most noticeable trend in the overview and uh we can see the values what are the maximum values uh where are the lower values and these are the things we have to put in overall or it would be more thoroughly understood when we write down the sample answers for this so let's move on to the next part that is our body paragraph one and last body paragraph two so this is the four body paragraph structure or general structure of every type of the graph although it can be varied according to the type of graph but general structures would be similar to these structures and introduction overall we have already seen in the body paragraph one and body paragraph two we are supposed to describe the trends of the graph what is happening in the graph whether there are some increments or the the declining trends and so on so first we'll start with the introduction part of the paragraph and further it will move on to the next body paragraphs so let's start with an introduction part so while talking about introduction part of the analytical paragraph or the task one we need five things to write down the introduction now let's see what are these five things that we have to analyze while writing the introduction so let's see what is the first thing that we have to see while writing the introduction that is type of graph whether it is a line graph pie chart process chart map chart and so on next thing that you have to assess that is data r information means about what the graph is talking about third thing that is location of the data if it is given sometime it is not given but if it is given we have to mention the location of the graph fourth thing that is time obviously we have to mention that what is the time range that is mentioned in the graph fifth thing that is units in what units the data is provided it can be in numbers it can be in thousands lakhs million billions or any other type of units can be given like percentage so these are the five things that we have to see while writing the introduction always remember we have to compile the introduction always in present indefinite tense because right now we are assessing the data and we are writing the information so that's why we have to write on in present indefinite tense let's see how to compile this data in the in the structures in the tenses and this we will understand with the with the help of an example so let us take an example so this is the example of line graph the line graph shows the proportions of mobile phones sold in india from 2000 to 2005 summarize the information so on the x-axis we are given the timeline that is from 2000 to 2005 and on the y-axis the percentage of mobile phones sold means units are given so let's see that what is happening from 2000 to 2001 what is happening the sale increased from five percent to ten percent and from 2001 to to what happened it got stabilized at 10 then it got declined then again increased and we can see from 2004 to 05 some fluctuations are there right so we have to summarize this information and we have to give the description for this so let's write down the introduction for this we have already seen these are the five things we have to see while writing the introduction let's see how these five things are compiled in the tenses type of graph obviously it's a line graph data or information obviously it is the data of mobile phone sold location india time from 2000 to 2005. units percentage or proportion let's see how these five things are compiled so our introduction should be like this the given line graph illustrates the information related to mobile phones sold or we can also say related to the sale of mobile phone from 2000 to 2005 so out of these five four things we have already considered what are these four things type of graph that is line graph data information related to sale of mobile phone timeline from 2000 to 2005. one thing more is missed here sale of mobile phones in india from 2000 to 2005. now four things are already considered along with the location at time this is the fifth thing that we are left with units percentage how we put the units the units are given in percentage and we're done with it introduction part these are the five things we have considered and we have compiled all these things into the into tenses so this is how we have to write on the introduction very simple but now some difficult part comes what is the difficult part that we have to paraphrase these tenses paraphrase means what paraphrase means we have to change the words with their synonyms that is word-based paraphrasing we have two types of paraphrasing that is first word based paraphrasing second is sentence based paraphrasing in the word based paraphrasing what we are supposed to do that instead of this word what other word can be used what are the synonyms of illustrates what are the synonyms of related to what are the synonyms of line graph synonyms of percentage means we have to replace the words generally why i'm replacing these words why i'm talking about replacement of these words because we have to show the examiner that we have a range of vocabulary or we have we know the variety of tenses and words and in sentence based paraphrasing we have to change the structures of the tenses to show the examiner and that we also know the different different structures of the tenses without affecting its meaning how to say the same thing in other lines or other words so this is sentence based paraphrasing so first we'll see with the word based paraphrasing what are the words that we can replace let's see instead of given word what are the other words that can be used i'll erase this so instead of given word what other words can be used assigned word can be used the assigned line graph provided rendered so these are the words that can be used instead of given word line graph or we can also say linear representation then illustrates instead of illustrates so many words are there depicts elucidates displays reveals these are some general words that can be used and if you want to know more things i have given the link in the description i have may i have made the notes of this these words and you will find all those words related to instead of this word related to what are the words let's see about are my favorite one that is pertaining to pertaining to means related to that can be used sale of mobile phones related to mobile phones sold in india this is how the structures can be modified from 2000 to 2005 that is our timeline we have different structures we have several structures how to depict the timeline let's see first structure that is from 2000 to 2005 next between 2000 and 2005 more structures over a period of five years and in the bracket we can write on 2000 to 2005. instead of period what other word can be used over a span of five years or in the wake of five years and in the bracket we can write down the range so these are the structures that can be used to depict the timeline units the units are given in percentage instead of a given word one word can be used that is calibrate please mind your spellings while writing the words because spellings and structures grammatical structures these are the two things which will be assessed on the priority basis while setting so calibrate then percentage instead of percentage lot many words are there percent percentile proportion so this is how the introduction part is written and if you want to and obviously these are so many words and very difficult to remember so the only solution to remember these words is practice only so practice more and more on these structures so this is all about the introduction part now let's see how to write down the overall part so let's see how to write down overall or overview for the writing task one so as the name suggests that we have to see the general overview of the whole task means what are the things uh that we are supposed to put in our overall let's see first the most noticeable trends we have to describe the trends which are most noticeable in our graph or we can say at the very first glance these are in our observation so most noticeable trends second thing we can go for the maximum values the maximum value are the minimum value or we can mention the highest value please remember you are not supposed to put the value you are supposed to only mention that this was the time frame when the the value hit the maximum target so ah don't put any value or or we can write down the minimum value when the value was the lowest and third thing that we have to see if two values are there or more than two values are there they are surpassing each other surpassing means where one one value is being declined and the other one is being inclined so this is how we have to write an overall but without example nothing can be understood so let's take an example to understand it in a more better way so this is the example that we are going to discuss and we will try to write down the overall for this or overview for this graph this is the graph of population in india and china and in the future years there's a there are some predictions and obviously uh with the the years which are in future that will ride on uh future indefinite for this so let's see what are the most noticeable trends in this obviously where india is surpassing the china's population it it will be happening in 2030 this is just a prediction i'm not anticipating anything this is just a prediction that india will surpass or we can say out populate the china so this is the most noticeable trend that we have to ride on what does the what is the second thing that we have to see that initially the india's population is less as compared to china but ultimately it is being peaked out in 2050 this is the trend we can see so let's see let's write on overall in the period of 50 years india is going to experience a steady growth in the population and will overtake china next trend that is the population of india is going to be peeked out p doubt means to touch the highest point peaked out in 2050 so this is how the overall is written and this is just one example of the overall there might be some confusions while writing this these confusions will be overtaken while practicing the graph r while uh while reading the sample answers of this so let's move on to our next passes uh that is body paragraph one in body paragraph one and body paragraph two we are supposed to analyze the trends of the graph so we'll see different type of trends like somewhere the value is increasing somewhere it is it is being stabilized somewhere it is declining some fluctuations are there or somewhere it is just below the particular value or just above the particular value how to show these trends in our own language that's going to be discussed in the further videos and i'll end up this video today and uh please share this videos as maximum as possible if you like these videos if you found these videos informative please subscribe our channel and thanks for watcing i'll see you in the next video
2022-01-26 14:33
